Journal 3–Mary L.

The Hour Past

There are indents in the cushions,
long hours wearing grooves
into the couch.

I think that electricity runs on time,
I know it sucks up
all of mine.

One Response to "Journal 3–Mary L."

  • *grooves, I believe is what you meant.
    I love how simply put this is, and at least for me, very relatable. Even though it has an outward appearance of simplicity, I believe one could read more into this– which of course is the definition of poetry. Love it! I’m surprised the title is “hour past” not “hours past”.

    1 deanna said this (November 10, 2012 at 9:17 pm)